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Mr. Toxic-Poison by ~Jesu:iconJesu:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Mr. Toxic-Poison helps me take the edge off razor blades.
He’s sweet, a little sour and smells faintly of almonds.
So strong he can brake the skies,
so kind he can correct all my wrongs.

My Cyanide-sweetie is a dandy man.
He carves me into brilliant shapes
and takes my picture
with stains and lost time.

Though at times things can go awry,
and I become that corpse,
so pale and death like
you might even forget I exist.

Yet, I’m always alive and back
to take some of the lover even my dealer doesn’t know.
This man knows how to heal me,
or make it hurt just right.

He’s my Narcotic-baby,
and I’ll never let him go.
©2006-2009 ~Jesu
:iconjesu:

Author's Comments

Ahahaha. You guys want to know what I did? I uploaded this poem, but put it in the discription part, and the description where the poem should be submitted. Boy have I not updated for a while...yeesh.

Okay, written because I wanted that sub to leave me alone, and the only way to do that was to write. It's pretty bad, but I like the first line. Thats about it. Oh, and pay no attention to the other one. DA was all like 'NOOO! I WILL NOT LET YOU DELETE YOUR OWN STUFF! LOLZ I'M SO COOL!11ONE!!'

Yeah, I hate them a little too.

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:iconstutter-freak:
~stutter-freak Jan 16, 2006, 5:23:08 PM
Mr.Toxic Poison sexes me hard... metaphorically speaking

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It's my neon pink life raft in a sea of woes.
:iconjesu:
~Jesu Jan 16, 2006, 10:29:34 PM
i think metaphorically is the only way he can sex...

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Easy to admire, difficult to love.
:iconforgiver-03:
~forgiver-03 Jan 17, 2006, 1:27:16 AM
The first line is cool, but my favourite has to be 'he carves me into brilliant shapes.'
:icondavidadge:
~davidadge Jan 17, 2006, 10:45:50 AM
that needs to be put to music. It doth r0xo0r mine s0x0rs!

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Die Wahrheit ist ein Chor aus Wind
kein Engel kommt um euch zu rächen
diese Tage eure letzten sind
wie Stäbchen wird es euch zerbrechen
:iconblacher:
~blacher Jan 17, 2006, 9:31:09 PM
Oh, mai gawd. THIS WOULD BE THE COOLEST SONG EVER>>>>>>>> YAY!

>.< GAH

Music needing.

My brain expired when I turned 12.

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Bite me. Very hard. Right there.
:iconjesu:
~Jesu Jan 17, 2006, 11:25:16 PM
hehe. wootage and other nerd text. if only i hjad musical talent. but i guess thats why i have friends, yes?

--
Easy to admire, difficult to love.
:iconjesu:
~Jesu Jan 17, 2006, 11:26:22 PM
wow...second person to say that. maybe someone will do it for me?! YAAAY! Erm...wait....that just sounds lazy.

--
Easy to admire, difficult to love.
:icondavidadge:
~davidadge Jan 18, 2006, 11:15:39 AM
I will do it!

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Die Wahrheit ist ein Chor aus Wind
kein Engel kommt um euch zu rächen
diese Tage eure letzten sind
wie Stäbchen wird es euch zerbrechen
:icondavidadge:
~davidadge Jan 18, 2006, 11:23:22 AM
right, music is mostly figured out, now I need recording gear.

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Die Wahrheit ist ein Chor aus Wind
kein Engel kommt um euch zu rächen
diese Tage eure letzten sind
wie Stäbchen wird es euch zerbrechen
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