Make it real. Let's live in a world without these secrets or pills I want to live in your arms without pain or harm Find me on a paper-stained road. These scraps of disgarded memory will lead you to where I'm running to. So one day I can open my eyes and not be blinded by the dark Please, Take all my fantasies, Delete and re-write my dreams in your image. It's where I want to be. |
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It's a little rough still, I have to work on the spelling and shit...so um..I guess I'll re-post it later after some critisicm and corrections.
I hope you like it. |
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that's cool, Jesu.
i especially like the lines
"Find me on a paper-stained road.
These scraps of disgarded memory"
GORGEOUS
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i tell people i built this robot girl for sex late at night, but mostly we play monoploly.
thank you. yeah, i liked those lines too. It was like...WAAH! WRITE IT DOWN BEFORE I FORGET!
Yeah.
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Easy to admire, difficult to love.
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."This is the very ecstasy of love".
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I am a leaf on the wind.
Watch how I soar.
and i would redo the line length in the 1st and last stanza, so they are either like the 2nd, or they are similar to each other
cute poem tho
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Castro is alive? O.o
what a beautiful piece of writing!
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Bite me. Very hard. Right there.
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Easy to admire, difficult to love.
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i tell people i built this robot girl for sex late at night, but mostly we play monoploly.
David says: hurrah!
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